Finally!! 8D

I think that this page looks very professional. It's my favorite one to date. Your ink work here is truly remarkable, too.

My only critique is in the paneling: I don't.... entirely understood what happened. Did he kill the boy? Why? I think that the last two panels might be better if they where on their own page, or something. Maybe I just need the another page, though!! *hint hint*

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^^ haha.... well, thanks! you're the only comment here, you know, and it's been two days! shows just how long I haven't been updating =.= Anyway, yeah. He's going to kill the boy. the last panel showed him leaping up. remember it reads from right to left, I forgot to mention that! sorry!

thanks a lot! for once I was doing ink work without Strifey's help... and I'm proud of how it turned out. it was my first time inking. lol...

Anyway~~ lotsa,lotsa and !!!! lubb ya! thanks alot for the critique!

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Dude...OVERTONE!!!There's random black triangles on it...is that malfunction? The line shading's nkinda messy, and on the closeup view, it's really rough, like you ran outta ink or something. Oh, and even my bro points out that you side view is slightly off... The nose that is...Plus....don't do the fwoosh words like that... It's so...cartoony!!

PS: Your first time inking...that just proves you're lazy man...TT.TT

PPS: Our darling reader up here is right!! What's the two panels holding the sword? I can recognize where or what he's doing with it...>.<And he's...tripping?

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*sigh*. too lazy to explain now...

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~: True power is when you're holding someone's fear in your hand and showing it to them :~

-Kinomoto Daisuke, Mirage`

I guess I'm not really in a position to critique, since my ink shading skills are pretty much worse. But if you want advanced critiques, I would say the shading on the right side of his shirt is kind of...chunky. It should have some shape...

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^^ okay.... thanks!!

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~: True power is when you're holding someone's fear in your hand and showing it to them :~

-Kinomoto Daisuke, Mirage`

i love you guys manga but why are the scenes grey =O ?

haha.. well, it's supposed to be night... so it's greyer

sorry, sorry, sorry for the late reply... our manga is on hold, probably to be redrawn, and I haven't checked this account in ages.

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~: True power is when you're holding someone's fear in your hand and showing it to them :~

-Kinomoto Daisuke, Mirage`

8'D you have new account?

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